Monday, March 18, 2013

Haiku: "Far Beyond"


                                                                               "Far Beyond"

                                               She lies at ease while her young wander the wild
                                    The peaceful nature surrounds as the weather is mild
                                                    The rested water mimics her figure
                                            which is bright and bold and built with vigor
                                                     Safety in her home has over come,
                                         with relief, her days of mothering are far beyond

2 comments:

  1. Aww it reminded me off an old grandmother
    or a ship!.
    Anyways I love it ;-)

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  2. Good job! just reading this peaceful poem made me feel relaxed and in a state of serenity. I like it. :)

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